Sunday, 19 May 2013

Year 7 Persuasion Unit- Lesson 7

LESSON 7 - WAR CRIES

Rationale- Allows students to combine knowledge of persuasive devices and rhetoric whilst creating their own text.
Lesson Objective-Able to see differences in motivating soldiers compared to political messages. Create own war speech using appropriate techniques.

Intro- 
o What are some persuasive writing devices? Write on board
o What are some rhetoric techniques?
o What is a war cry?

Activity
o Show numerous war cries from films- Pirates of the Caribbean, Troy, 300 and Braveheart.
o Then discuss what they all have in common. What techniques were used? How different to political 
        speeches? What types of emotions do they convey?
o Write in book- a technique and an example from each clip
o Create own war cry- Build scenario with class- who are you battling, how many soldiers, are you the 
        under dogs, where is it set, do you have ammunition etc. Write in pairs- should be at least ½ a page.     
        One person from pair will perform next lesson. Prize for most persuasive/ original. 






Year 7 Persuasion Unit- Lesson 6

LESSON 6 - POLITICAL SPEECHES

(double lesson)

Rationale- Develop understanding of rhetorical devices.
Lesson Objective-Learn definitions of rhetoric techniques. Identify them in political speeches.

Intro- 
o What makes a good speech? (Write on board)
o Does a good speech have to be persuasive?
o What are the different types of speeches?
o Which ones are persuasive? 

Activity
o Go through rhetoric techniques- use definition page
o Show youtube clips of current political speeches. Explain political, social and historical context of each  
        speech.
o Speech handout- fill in appropriate boxes after each clip
o Discussion- What techniques were used? 

I used the following speeches

                                        Only showed approx first 5 min

                                         Used this as this was current in the news at the time of unit

                                         Again this was current at the time


Year 7 Persuasion Unit- Lesson 5

LESSON 5 - PERSUASION ON FACEBOOK

Rationale- Social Media is a big part of everyday life in today’s world. By analysing different techniques and videos that go viral students can begin to see the different forms of today’s persuasion.
Lesson Objective- Become aware of the way they are persuaded on social media.
o Class discussion on different forms of persuasion in social media.o What have been some of the biggest videos that have gone viral due to facebook?o Kony- only show a little bit                     Jason's message was released last Monday. By Thursday it had amassed 26 million views.               
                            When I last looked at it on Saturday it was up to 63 million views                     And what about truth, lies and propaganda? The Kony video was made by people whose             
                            intentions seem good, even if their ideology and analysis may be a touch simplistic. But 
                           what if a video with more sinister antecedents were to get this kind of viral boost? It 
                           suggests the old saying that "a lie can run round the world before the truth has got its boots 
                           on" is acquiring a chilling new resonance. Relate to Hitler.


o Till this day- this video is going around at the moment. What elements of persuasion are used? Are they effective? 


NB- My students were physically moved by this video that i had some crying. The discussion after the video was beautiful and truly touching as the entire class supported those around them. 



Kid Mr President-How does he have so much conviction? Are we persuaded? 


NB- This is a hilarious clip and i found that it broke the tension from the previous video really well.

This lesson is one of my favourite and most successful ones i have done. Students were engaged and there were a multi-layers of learning occuring.



Year 7 Persuasion Unit- Lesson 4

LESSON 4 - CLASS DEBATE

Lesson Objective- Build debating and rebutting skills.
Rationale- To develop inner persuasive qualities by having to stand on a particular side of an argument.

o Introduce idea of rebuttal- When someone presents an argument you can oppose their idea by restating it and identifying why you believe it’s incorrect. Ie- All homework should be banned because we should use after school hours for fun activities. The rebuttal could be- The other side said that the time spent on homework should be instead spent on fun activities, however we believe that homework can be fun, for instance I had a science project that required me to build a volcano which exploded and I found this very enjoyable. Therefore we still be that homework should not be banned.
o Split class in 2
o Topic for/against= Should the school day be shorter?
o Teams write ideas together and divide arguments amongst team. Each team member writes a PEEL paragraph for their argument.

Teams take it in turns to say argument. After each speaker the opposing team will start with a rebuttal before their argument. 

This was done during a double lesson. Students do need that amount of time to write and then present ideas. 

Year 7 Persuasion Unit- Lesson 3

LESSON 3- BOTH SIDES OF THE ARGUMENT


Lesson Objective-Look at arguments from different angles and be able to support ideas with evidence.
Rationale- Naplan assessments tend to have should/shouldn’t questions.

o Divide into groups of 3- assign a facilitator and someone for and someone against
o Draw up FOR/ AGAINST on page
o Each group given different topic
o   Should junk food be banned from schools
o   Should the legal driving age of 16 be lowered
o   Should water restrictions be used all year round
o   Should swearing be allowed on daytime tv
o   Should violent video games be banned
o   Should social media be a subject in schools
o   Should cigarettes be illegal
o   Should the legal voting age be lowered to 16
o   Should animals be kept in zoos
Conclusion-
o  Group presents their main argument for and against to class.
o  Class decides which way they believe going off only what arguments were presented.



Year 7 Persuasion Unit- Lesson 2

Lesson 2- Persuasive Arguments

Rationale- Develop language conventions appropriate for audience in persuasive arguments.
Lesson Objective- To develop language devices that aide in presenting persuasive arguments and to recognise how these affect audience.

Read and comment on persuasive language device in 3D Dinosaur.
-                o   Emotive language
o   Rhetorical questions
o   High modality
o   Repetition
o   Address the reader

3D DINOSAUR

This opinion piece was published in a media blog.

Call me the youngest dinosaur in the world. Not the kind whose
jaws lunge at you out of the phoney depths of a 3D movie. The other
kind: a dinosaur of outmoded opinion. How outmoded? Let’s just
say I consider 3D physically dangerous, economically predatory,
artistically self-defeating and imaginatively stunting.

That kind of dinosaur.

Take off your 3D glasses for a moment and look at some evidence
from the real world. (Remember that place?)
When you watch a 3D fi lm, your brain receives two slightly
different 2D images and is forced to make sense of them by
merging them into one. The immediate result of this merging is
an enhanced sense of apparent depth (the ‘third’ dimension).
The not-so-immediate result is, for at least 15 per cent of us, eye
strain, headaches and a dangerous disorientation. These risks
are greatest for children and teenagers. (And which two groups
of people form the major audiences for 3D?) It is even possible
that children will develop permanent problems with depth
perception if they are overexposed to 3D.

Why do fi lm-makers infl ict these risks on us? So they can
charge us extra at the ticket offi ce. Who wins out of this? Not
us. So who does? The fi lm-makers themselves?

They might think they do, but they should think again. If 3D
becomes the new standard, we will see a shift in the kind of
fi lms that are made. Setting and action take over; character,
relationships and plot wither. Where once we explored the
depths of a character’s psyche, we plunge into the depths
of some 3D ravine. Where once we followed the twists and
turns of a developing relationship or a subtle plot, we
crawl through a 3D cavern, dodging 3D bats. No fi lm that
lacks the promise of a 3D thrill will even fi nd the fi nancial
backing to be made. So stand back, all you serious fi lmmakers,
and make room for kids’ movies and animation.

But the most infuriating thing about 3D is that it is
not necessary. There is already depth in 2D media.
The imagination fi nds it there. If we depend on special
glasses to fi nd it, we have already begun to replace
the wonders of imagination with the gimmicks of
technology.

I heard a child leaving a cinema recently announce,
‘I wish life was 3D!’ That should be sad, not just to us
dinosaurs, but to everyone.

John Simpson



Year 7 Persuasion Unit- Lesson 1

(This is the last 3 weeks of a persuasion unit)

Lesson 1- Persuasive Paragraphs

Rationale-To turn opinions and ideas into successful persuasive arguments.

Lesson Objective- To learn structure of persuasive paragraphs and introductions.


Introduce PEEL structure
P= Point
E= Explain
E= Example
L= Link

Workshop together and write following 2 paragraphs


PEEL PARAGRAPH
A trip has been planned for all students but the place is undecided. The principal insists that the place must be fun and educational. Therefore the class needs to research the place and convince the principal that the trip should be to ………….
Heading


Introduction





Body 1 (1st argument)














Body 2 (2nd Argument)

Body 3 (3rd Argument)


Conclusion

Lunar Park: the place to go.


I think we should go to Lunar Park. It is easy to get to, not too expensive and so much fun. A visit to Lunar Park is the best choice.


Lunar Park is located in Sydney so transport is available quiet easily. It can be reached if we use a ferry, bus and/or train. Students can travel there safely and conveniently. I estimate that the trip will in total take 3 hours and 27min. This requires us leaving Hamilton station on the 7.34am train and getting to Circular Quay before going on the 10.40am ferry across to Lunar Park. We can spend a wonderful day at Lunar Park and transport there and back will not be a problem.


_________________________

_________________________


The choice of Lunar Park as the place for our excursion is the best choice to make. It will be easy to get to, the cost is low and it would be a great deal of fun.
Make a decision on where you want to go

Your Point of view
State different Arguments
Restate your position



Point-State your argument
Explain- Why
Example- Evidence
Link- Restate argument
















Link to introduction.
Reuse key words/phrases used in arguments.

EDMODO


www.edmodo.com

So far this has been the best educational tool that I have come across.

For those that don't know or havent heard about Edmodo, in simplistic terms it's facebook for schools. You set up a teacher account and create a group/s. You then have your students join your group so that you can stay connected to them at all times. Similar to facebook you have status updates/post that everyone can see. This works great if you do activities in class and want to look at them at the end. Students just upload theirs to the class page and everyone can look, enjoy and learn. You can also add comments and like posts, so marking and feedback is very easy to do. Alerts are also a great tool, as you can remind students of upcoming deadlines or exams and they come up as highlighted notifications. Once you get the hang of Edmodo you can also set up assignments and mark books online, add polls, have parent accounts so you can give feedback in a timely manner and parents can see what the students are doing, you can also upload worksheets, web links, presentations to your account and make them available to your students. It works great if students are away or didnt finish activities as they can go back to them at any time.

The best bit about Edmodo is that it is complelty private unless you give access to each student. You can stop kids from posting, you can proof and posts before they are posted and you get to change and assign privacy according to how you want to work.  It's also great for teacher development as you can connect to educators all around the world and share ideas and resources.

Amazing educational tool.

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Philosophy of Teaching


I believe that education is a tool for greater happiness and opportunities in life.  “Pleasure is not a means but the goal in itself, so that “To learn is pleasure” means “to learn is the goal itself” (Shim, 2008). Education should nurture this love of learning so that every student can succeed in their chosen field. Happiness according to Aristotle, Plato and Confucius (amongst others) is the final goal of mankind- people want to be happy (Noddings, 2007 & Shim, 2008). I agree with Confucius’s philosophy that we should teach students “to become a man of character rather than knowledge” (Shim, 2008). Whilst knowledge in the core subjects at school may allow students to succeed academically, it is important that the whole child is educated in order for them to function in the world to the best of their abilities.  If we can encourage “improvements of the soul” (Noddings, 2007) or the “ren” as Confucius calls it (Shim, 2008), then education can journey further than being a socialistic system where students are merely numbers and expected to receive top grades, to an organization where students enjoy their learning and are intrinsically motivate to strive higher. Shouldn’t happiness and teaching of the whole child be the aim for education?

I believe good teaching stems from a relationship between the teacher and learner that is interchangeable.  A teacher must know their students in order to scaffold their education which ultimately leads to student autonomy in their learning and the monotonous situation of teachers being narrators of knowledge and the concept of ‘banking’ is eliminated (Freire, 2008).  To have a relationship in which this change from teacher to learner and vice versa occurs, then a personal and spiritual transformation must be made by both sides (Shim, 2008). Teachers must know their student in order to address their individual needs, regardless of their context.  Every child must be given the opportunity to transform their learning so that they can become “beings for themselves” and not merely a replica of someone else’s values and beliefs (Freire, 2007).  Such pedagogy regards knowledge as a fluid mixture that forms through social construction and encourages students to connect with higher-order thinking and to also communicate and reflect on what they are learning (NSW Dep of Edu, 2003). Through scaffolding this autonomy these relationships will encourage enjoyment with learning itself and the ability to “contemplate the real world and the form of good” (Shim, 2008).

To become educated I believe you have to become a natural man (Noddings, 2007); to think independently and to value learning as it leads to happiness. Possessing the attitude that students are people too (Tauber, 1999) teachers need to ensure they create learning that addresses all the needs of all students. With a strong emphasis on the National Framework for Values Education (DET, 2005), learning should include life lessons that educate the whole child, preparing them for the world. Teachers should become accustom to questioning curriculum and fighting for what they deem to be best classroom practice. As Dewey argues, teachers need to remove themselves from being “pedagogical slaves who passively conform to the will of authoritarian elites” (Webster, 2009).  Change should occur frequently in order to stay current with issues and student contexts. What is valued in education needs to be reviewed on a case by case system. Does every child need to experience Shakespeare in order to succeed in life or to find happiness?

Commitment to teaching is pivotal in order to provide quality teaching. Commitment to the job is put simply by Confucius as he believes it lies solely in the notion of continual learning (Shim, 2008). Through a teacher/ learner shared education learning occurs continuously, however professional development through involvement in faculty, area or globally is crucial to ensuring that teachers themselves find happiness in learning. Teachers also must operate as professionals and exercise independence within their teaching in order to stay current and meet all the needs of students (Webster, 2009).  This continual learning is best put by Dewey (1897):  “education is growth... it is not a preparation for life: education is life itself”.  To combine this thought with Confucius’s notion of happiness shows that if education is life itself and happiness is the goal of life, then happiness and education should go hand in hand.

Above is a representation of what I believe at this current time, but I alike to Confucius realize that my views may change as teachers must continuously study and teach in order to stay improve their professional practice and philosophy. I also feel that through this it is inevitable that happiness in education can be found.  This happiness relates to inner gratification of learning as a teacher, but also in viewing students embrace happiness in their own lives. Teachers need to strive to go beyond the books and memorizing so that the whole child is educated. What we value needs to be reconsidered as each and every student comes with a different set of needs. But at the core of all my philosophy is the notion to be a teacher that can make a difference. 



WORKS CITIED

AITSL. (2012). Australian Professional Standards for Teachers. http://www.teacherstandards.aitsl.edu.au/Standards/AllStandards

DET. (2005). National Framework for Values Education in Australian Schools. http://www.valueseducation.edu.au/verve/_resources/Framework_PDF_version_for_the_web.pdf

Dewey, J. (1897). My Pedagogic Creed. School Journal, 54, 77-80.

Freire, P. (2007). Pedagogy of the Oppressed (original 1968). New York, NY: The Continuum International Publishing Group.

Freire, P. (2008). The “Banking” Concept of Education (8th ed).  Boston: Bedford- St. Martin’s.

Noddings, N. (2007). Philosophy of Education (second edition ed.): Westview Press.

NSW Dep of Edu, (2003). Quality Teaching in NSW Public Schools- Discussion Paper. Sydney, NSW.

Shim, S. (2008) ‘A philosophical investigation of the role of teachers: A synthesis of Plato, Confucius, Buber, and Freire’. Teaching and Teacher Education, 24, pp. 515-535.

Tauber, R. (1999). Classroom Management :Sound Theory and Effective Practice (3rd ed). New York: Ebook.

Webster, S. (2009). Why educators should bring an end to pedagogy. Australian Journal of Teacher Education, 34(1), 42-53.



Welcome

Hi everyone,

My name is Tahnae Luke and im currently completing my double degree in Teaching (Secondary)/ Arts (English and Drama) at University of Newcastle. At this present time im in my final year on a 10 week internship. Im absolutely loving everyday of it and cannot wait to be fully qualified and teach everyday. 

As im half way through my internship, I've already been teaching 3/4 load for 5 weeks. I've had some amazing lessons thanks to my amazing students and others have asked what I've been doing with them so i thought i could write a blog so everyone can see. I know I'm only an intern and have so much more to learn but some of the classes i have taught have been used throughout the school with great success.

My philosophy of teaching comes done to making learning fun, so that students can find happiness and a life long passion for learning (I will post my philosopy of teaching at another time). 

As a bit of a background to my current classes so that the lessons make sense i have a Year 7 top class who have just completed a Persuasion Unit with me and are not onto a Film Unit with Harry Potter. I have a Year 9 class who I am working on basic literacy skills. They have just finished a Protest Song Unit and are starting a Craft of Writing Unit looking at Holes the novel. Year 10 have a Context/Novel Unit which we are doing Hunger Games for. Year 11 Standard are doing Module B- Close Study of texts looking at Gwen Harwood Poetry and Year 12 English Studies are doing a unit of film. 

Hopefully you enjoy my blog and find some useful resources or lesson ideas. The more ideas we have out there can only mean that teachers are looking at different and more exciting ways to approach teaching and learning.

:)